A bad day
Turns into a few
And it’s a bad week
Before you realize,
Now its three bad weeks
In a row;
A bad month
Succeeded by brethren,
12 of them,
A bad year now
And you feel so helpless,
Wondering every moment,
If you’ll ever feel the sun again
Or the peace you felt
Every time the sky lit up mauve,
Sliced by lightning;
The detachment is getting
Too much to bear,
The quiet is
Too eerie now,
Oh how you long
For noise of some kind
Even if it were
Your own strangled screams.
Great post!
Really liked the poem and the positive note in the end.
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Thank you 😀
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Welcome 😀
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So very true… Transformation is mere perspective … Little by little we change this and one day you wake and the first thing you feel is good
Practice what you want to be good at and it readily reappears
I’ve seen this happen!!
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True words. 🙂
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God, that poem really does hit me in the heart. Amazing 🙂
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Thank you!
I’ve always believed that emotions play a major role in uniting us, maybe it’s because we can all relate to the same thing?
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definitely!
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Glad to know that you out of that space now 🙂 When I first read the poem I could feel a hint of depression crawling up then a sense of relief after you explained that you are out of it. You toyed with my emotions!
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Quite the plot twist, wasn’t it? :p
Thank you 🙂
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We have to remember during those bad days that they too shall pass.
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True. 🙂
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Lord, if life stayed as it was at 17 forever, it might be hard. But it gets so much better.
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Sometimes, that is the only motivation to keep going, really.
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You can do it! When I was in a dark place, sometimes I just looked forward to a certain TV show each night, or a meal that made me happy. But as long as you’re breathing, you have a purpose. So keep breathing.
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I try my best. 🙂
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Beautifully written and resonant!
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Thank you. 🙂
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You’re welcome:)
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Great post… It’s really quite an inspiration for me since I am experiencing bad days but I know one day everything will be fine…
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Hi!
Thanks for responding to my email. A very nice poem with sad start yet a beautiful end.
The series I’ve started is ‘ a new friend ‘ which I’ve already told you about.
Kindly check you email for further communication.
Thanks and regards.
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Thank you so much! 🙂
I’ve had internet troubles for a few days, but I’ll try to respond as soon as possible.
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You’re welcome. It is completely okay. As per your time.
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Thank you. 🙂
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🙂
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A great, inspiring poem and post. Thanks for sharing and for following my blog!
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Pleasure’s all mine. 🙂
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I only remember parts of 17 (now 28.5) and I can tell you that life can really get better with time with perseverance. hang in there! 🌌
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Thank you for the kind words, I’ll try my best. 🙂
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Love it, so well written ☺
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Thank you. 🙂
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that’s ok!
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What all we can do is keep trying ,no surety
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True. 🙂
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please follow back
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This is so depressing yet captivating O-o
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Thank you, and isn’t that the way it works for people too? 🙂
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True xDDDD
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I enjoy looking through a post that can make people think.
Also, thanks for allowing me to comment!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Great poem! I love your blog 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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